vendredi 23 janvier 2009

I need you

Hello, it's just a simple word
But we coudn't say
when we meet on the road
we turn face and walk away

hello, I say inside me
with my voice and with yours
deep inside I feel free
not of walls not of closed doors

just see you in the Morning
just feel your whisper
I forget the pain and the anger
I don't know if it is the spring
I don't know if it is the winter

8 commentaires:

sara el korchi a dit…

you gotta say what is in your mind,something about you doesn't seem right this year .any way he also say it inside be sure

sara el korchi a dit…

i like this poem so much its so wonderful it simple but it has several connotations good

Maryem Chhiti a dit…

I mean friends in general.And I'm not sure that the others think or do like me, anyway, what is important for me is to understand that I say hello and all the peom despite the distance(inside me)between us.Anyway thanks Sara!

Anonyme a dit…

yes it is important to say hello to everyone, even sometimes when they don't say hello back

M'Rabett a dit…

Masha'Allah, very awesome...
Keep up the good work poet girl
You are soulful & spirited..
god bless you!

Anonyme a dit…

C'est bien de dire ça, good maryama

sara el korchi a dit…

i know what do you mean my darling.so you needn't to complaine

Maryem Chhiti a dit…

Thank you all:)